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Sunday, December 19, 2004

Word-Verses

Gaurdian last month published the most beautiful words in english based on a British council survey.This is an attempted verse-project of some of my favourite words amongst them in regular use.

Mother
Her highness
A singular exception
of unconditional everything
in a very demanding creation.

Sweetheart
A skipped beat
of a dying diabetic
poisoned with
the sucrose of love.

Sunshine
An invisible proof
from an opera
of burning helium
adding colourful emotions
to the vision.

Hilarious
A word astray
in the
Post modern seizure
of
Rolling on the floor
and laughing;
(Yeah good one dude!!)


Passion
Unprincipled venom
defining humanity
that can be draped by no vein
from unmanifest.

If
Power of laconic
smile that can amend
fortunes in a single breath.


Smile
An arcane window of
conscious hidden within
Silent invite to
woe and wonder akin.


Blossom
Innocence lost,
Unfound.. ........


Gorgeous
A sublime secret
shared amongst
a Miss, a Mrs.
and
a Mistress
with nature.

Hope
A dear negotiation
for a better breath
in optimistic free trade;
paid in small
instalments
over time.

Serendipity
An unexpected kiss;
My first
password
at
Yahoo
dot com.

Love
An elusive mirage
Often chased
Forgotten when reached;
A lingering memory left behind.

16 comments:

Vijayalaxmi Hegde said...

Beautiful

Anonymous said...

how true...to some of them...some haven't had the providence of experiencing them myself...so cant say..

yes indeed hauntingly alluring...(seems me likey alluring lot)

NS said...

yosso,
that was beautifully written...:)

nithya

Unknown said...

Enjoyable !
Like a hot sweet tea,
Or a moonlight walk.

Kraz Arkin said...

So if we make a sentence with all those words...

Ubermensch said...

Vij,
thanks:)

Anon my friend;
gotcha!!!!!u are done for gal! only one person i know uses hauntingly alluring back to back:))))
thanks

nithya
thanks for the vist and the words

akshay,
bingo,u have said it all!!

kraz
thanks for the visit;hmmm too effortful i must say...tho david has given a try!!

BZ said...

yoss, beautiful!
I like Love, Blosson and Serendipity the best :)
Amazingly Beautiful.

Jessica said...

Passion: those words could not have been more perfect.

Vijayalaxmi Hegde said...

hey Sudarshan, that's a neat one! ;)

Anonymous said...

ok i like the last kiss one just in case you wanna join the rally , i would suggest voting for clinton.... more female interns at apitol hill ;)

small squirrel said...

hey, thanks for your comment on my blog... and this post...wonderful... serendipity is especially great!!!

:..M..: said...

Lovely, lovely. I esp. liked 'Love' and 'Passion'. I've enjoyed reading through your blog too. :)

Tony J. said...

Since everyone else is weighing in...it was a lovely post and my favorites are "Sunshine" and "Blossom." I'm not a huge fan of opera, but it was just plain perfect to describe that sort of blinding brightness...as if we hear the crescendo when the sun is emerging from behind a cloud...and when it lights up your whole life, you have to turn up your head and feel that highest note burning your skin. Wonderful...really.

Ubermensch said...

saranya,jessica,small squirrel
thanks for dropping by and the comments.

sudhi,
thank u; i really admire many indian *spinners*.i strongly suspect that u may be the cousin....:))

vij; hold it do u want ur spine snapped:))

anon
thank u....they struck me off the voting list.

:M:,
thank u for the words, glad to have u around.

krennke,
thanks for the visit and the comments; thats three in a sentence:))

fuego;
sometimes u make me stael ur commenting style,
u just drilled experience into those verses ;
highest note burning ur skin....as they say its not the words, its the imagination thanks and hope to have more such wonderful feedback.

. : A : . said...

Well written. My favourites - Mother, Passion, Smile, Gorgeous, Love.

Is that too many?

;-)

Ubermensch said...

:A:,
not at all...happy u liked it.
thanks:)

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