Drinking metaphors...
This table is our couch,
the drink I buy you
is our pillow.
You lean and confide,
In this moment here, now-
I can only pity your despair.
All thought dear,
is a veneer, waiting to be
corroded by time;
all bonds are
'basically' built by bricks of emotion.
Perhaps yes, I wonder
or pretend to
and
fiddle with my glass;
In a brief silence,
I try to reach out to your pity
while you take out your cigarette.
I cant.
Do you know, I ask, the difference
between a cake and a biscuit?
……No ,
Both are 'essentially' made of same,
just , one gets harder with time and the other
softer
I utter, lighting your cigarette.
7 comments:
Hello Douglas
Im pleased you like it. Thanks for dropping by and the words.Shall hop by your room as well.
Fraud
Thanks
cake and a biscuit? chips and kabobs are more like it :)
The kind reproach and the bit of wisdom should be over a drink, just like the poem. Cheers.
Wow. Loved the cake and biscuit analogy...
Meta fors metaphors.Thanks rajesh.
wild reeds
im glad u did.
u uttered all that?? or muttered?
The mood is palpable and I love the way you bring it out.
finny
wellwaatever nevermind
Hey Kish
Long time! Thanks
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