-A window ajar is a prelude in building to the joy of being limitless! That uneasiness of being familiar somehow, sometime, somewhere.......

Saturday, March 19, 2005

vulnerable when strong...?

While you silently plagiarised
my wayward dream
I avenged
your borrowed laughter
in a fleeting thought

as if it was my own….

17 comments:

karma said...

nice :))

IdeaSmith said...

Breath-taking....I've linked you.

Prat said...

Few words put together to say so much..." your borrowed laughter ". Beautiful!
And what you had mentioned on my blog, well, its mutual!

inspiredbylife said...

What? Now you too started plagiarised? You liar! :D

Free Spirit said...

Very clever! I was pleasantly surprised.

tragicomix said...

It was a dreary workday afternoon, my eyes struggling to stay open, unable to find adequate reason..i read these words, i remembered a thousand betrayals, all my friendships, unrequited loves, and all agonies unavenged.(i'm not even sure if that was your intent)..but such is the power of your poetry..it awakens my soul..a whiff of fresh air..a window in my dark world..

came to your blog after comments on mine..i am a little uneasy about the uncanny resemblance in profile..nirvana, philosophy,.but your blog and your writing are what what i would aspire to..

Sudarshan said...

Thats convoluted..nicely done Uber....btw you must have missed our medium pacer in action :)

Aradhita said...

Very nice indeed! Need to be read more than once to get the essence of it!
cya!

yet another1 said...

ur such a wonderful wordsmith!

Ubermensch said...

kakes,
long time, trust ur doing fine..
thank u

idea smith,
thank u .my pleasure.amazing number of blogs uve got there.

prat,
thank u...:)

IBL,
me? not today?

belle,
thank u..just wanted to cpature the essence of such a feeling we all have once in a while.

targic comix,
yup i remember,im glad u can relate.it was just athought which found teh right words.thank u.

sudharshan
thank u ...hmm, now thats maladaptive behavior...:) i have to just leave you with athe david gower quote...i would rather be consistent in performance than result.

aradhita thank u,

yet ano...thanks indeed, i feel thats exaggerated.

Saranya Kishore said...

Yoss,
WOW, that was nice! :)
And yes, I did have to read it like 4 times before I could understand it though :))

Ruben said...

Awesome poem! Thanks for sharing!

:..M..: said...

Wow! This was breath-taking!

Pincushion said...

Very clever and well crafted!
Cheers!

Ubermensch said...

SK,ruben ,:M:,pincushion,
thank u, im glad.

gulnaz said...

brilliant :)

Ubermensch said...

gulnaz,
honoured.

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