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Sunday, July 23, 2006

Sea song...

Seawetsoil seawater seaair,
all become
seafront.
Seagulls
fly low cooing..
See…

kids, colours; joyous
families promenade;
seagreen, seagrey, seablue
sea strums sea music
at sea distance
see...life
Sea.


~ West Sussex.

8 comments:

Martin said...

Brillant! I love this! The rhythm and the cleverly use of the word sea in so many ways.

Ubermensch said...

Thanks Martin, Im glad that you got it, It was my first attempt at TS Eliots concept of Auditory imagination.
cheers

Rajesh said...

now that you mentioned it, I checked out the concept. Good exercise after a long time :)

relished distilling auditory sense of words into images.

Ubermensch said...

yes , true rajesh, we gotta assimiliate more. Its about a town called worthing( u might remember from importance of being earnest) and the poem to me reflects teh exact sense of teh experience.
cheers

educatedunemployed said...

Very interesting.

Ubermensch said...

In waat way?

educatedunemployed said...

The use of words.A fascinating alliteration.

Ubermensch said...

gracias

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