voice of silence
You are in a beer garden; they talk to you, talk with you, talk after you, talk before you-politics, sport, weather, philosophy....clearance sales...everything. The age old heliumball melts a bit further upon the horizon, birds on springtime trees sing oblivious of everything, the river water beside replies to every whisper of the oncoming breeze, you sip a mouthful of your pint consuming the harmony of tchaiskovsky in the background. You think you are there, they think you are there. You are not, you are with a lady whom you saw yesterday, anxious and sweating; and starting to hear voices while she is born deaf......
you are amazed..
some things at some times actually make you feel , that may be there is a unshaved guy upstairs, just fiddling about......
10 comments:
huh!!! maybes about an unshaved guy upstairs....??
Yosso....are you well??? Or was it just the Tchaikovsky???...:-))
I am now very interested....was she able to describe how she felt what she heard?...If so, pls to share...pls pls...:-))
Uff!! If I'd seen this first, I would have skipped the sulls commentboard...
Nice imagery here.
Also like the irony in this part,
"You think you are there, they think you are there. You are not, you are with a lady whom you saw yesterday, anxious and sweating; and starting to hear voices while she is born deaf......"
Your peices are sure difficult to interpret at the first go... but when they fall in place, it just fuses into understanding, which again is only my perception...
Whats the drink u mention? sounds cool...
cya
chay,
have answered that dear.
:a:,
thanks, it was exactly the way i felt at that time.
aradhita,
true, i agree but havent i always insisted that my words unfortunately need a special emotion to be understood in entirety.perhaps someday i could be be more plain or perhaps not :))
dont ask me the drink, some cheap danish beer i think...:)
No its nice the way you word your thoughts...sometimes people tell me its what you write about...but mostly I think it is how you write about 'whatever' you write about. That is what makes all the difference.
Gawd! That could be a marketing funda, I just said up there!
aradhita,
of course whys n hows , after a certain time period when the whats are answered.
Loved it
thank u ammani.
i have been visiting your blog for sometime now ... amazing... your sense of being able to get across the immense "loudness of silence"is amazing... umm do u like reading the works of Milan Kundera? if you have not read his works .. ohh you must ... really .. please, please do ... he lives in the same world ...
Som,
Thanks for following my blogs.I have read most of kunderas school and like many theories if not all.BUt cant say love them.
Thank you for the reco and such kind uncompelled words.
cheers
Uber
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