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Friday, February 18, 2005

To whatever they call life....

Right, another juvenalia...

To Whatever they call life.....

With accepted terms of prejudiced compromises,
in bowdlerizing smiles quite indispensible;
Will you sleep with me?
beneath dirty linens of dementing grey matters,
Will you bid for me?
when I sell myself for veneer flatters
Will you, for all the faults and lovely waltz,
take off your hat when I die
or
push me unto the stage
for
yet another try?

15 comments:

luz de la luna said...

Wonderful poem!

I loved these lines: "Will you, for all the faults and lovely waltz,
take off your hat when I die"

Best Wishes
Luna

inspiredbylife said...

hey beautiful lines. Man you play with words... and make them rock n roll. Simply, loved these lines:

"Will you, for all the faults and lovely waltz,
take off your hat when I die
or
push me unto the stage
for
yet another try?
"

Sigh... Life... ain't it beautiful!?!

Sumit

d.K.m said...

dude this is awesome ... u need to write some more :))

Sudarshan said...

Ahh the boss is back in form! Keep them coming man!

Aradhita said...

That was an ace dealt out so profoundly!! Loved it!

small squirrel said...

wow. damn.
I could read this over and over and glean something new each time....

wonderful!

Free Spirit said...

I like the flow of your work, which is why I keep coming back.

=)

Prat said...

Wonderful, wonderful are the ways in which you use the keyboard!
Keep 'em coming!

Pincushion said...

'push me unto the stage
for
yet another try? '

wow ! that packs a punch..and straight to the gut..!

Ubermensch said...

luna,IBL,sudharshan,kishore,aradhita,squirrel,belle,prat,pin cushion,
thanks all for such kind and undeserving:) words....beeen unbelievably busy,goddamn bleep hasnt stopped singing!
later
uber

. : A : . said...

"Will you sleep with me?
beneath dirty linens of dementing grey matters,"

Really liked this bit. A line you want to keep reading again and again.

Well written!

boyracer said...

dust yourself off and try again, darling!

boyracer said...

dust yourself off and try again, darling!

Ubermensch said...

thank u august.

Ubermensch said...

hey arena , missed ur comment,
thanks and will do:)
uve got the habit of hittin nivce handles

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