tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7738141.post113917971702456986..comments2023-09-28T12:21:41.644+01:00Comments on d.é.j.à. v.u.: Whispers of rescued secrets...Ubermenschhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07929115834655344542noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7738141.post-1140049809479736042006-02-16T00:30:00.000+00:002006-02-16T00:30:00.000+00:00I thought you would rajesh, given the prophetic in...I thought you would rajesh, given the prophetic influence of Mr stearns and I totally see what you mean by mixed, I can feel it, but as it goes with poetry, it signifies more of a personal meaning.<BR/>Im glad it managed to evoke some identification.Thanks for reading and the comment.Ubermenschhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07929115834655344542noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7738141.post-1140038968755605322006-02-15T21:29:00.000+00:002006-02-15T21:29:00.000+00:00I subjected myself the tyranny of imposing a littl...I subjected myself the tyranny of imposing a little bit of symbolist/imago/aggregation a-la-eliot and splitting some of the unhyphenated compound words here.<BR/><BR/>I must confess that even thought the results were mixed, I've got a few like the metaphysics of now in the binah and bodypolitics of action in the broader context of time made way for some interesting insights. thanks.Rajeshhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17054636458306496958noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7738141.post-1139695137895229222006-02-11T21:58:00.000+00:002006-02-11T21:58:00.000+00:00Les,Thanks for such kind words, glad you could rel...Les,<BR/>Thanks for such kind words, glad you could relate.<BR/><BR/>enig,<BR/>Thanks as always,<BR/>I can imagine the romanticist in you liking the unlearning one.I totally agree with you about the piece being fragmented.I myself felt it quite deeply and though tried finishing it later , I coudnt; so left it as it was. The tiredsome travels perhaps?<BR/>I wanted to experiment with schools in each stanza- first with metaphysics, second-ethics, third-empiricism, fourth politics/action. Anyway not happy.<BR/><BR/>And who better can explain wanting to and having said?:)<BR/>cheers<BR/><BR/>Mr. Fraud,<BR/>Thank you.However I woudnt agree with you, classes and leagues woudnt apply to poetry, all poems are moments(best explained by hindi word-phal) wrapped with words.They either communicate or dont.What was communicated, why it was communicated etc are all subjective battles.Thats the beauty.Or from another corner pain.Ubermenschhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07929115834655344542noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7738141.post-1139381095123720942006-02-08T06:44:00.000+00:002006-02-08T06:44:00.000+00:00liked the unlearning in experience the most....the...liked the unlearning in experience the most....there is something about the tapestry of words there, which makes the imagery so solemn, yet so sweet....<BR/><BR/>I'm curious about the sequence in which u wove it all together.....the entire piece, I mean....am not sure if I get the drift...it seems a bit broken in between...don't know why....almost as if you took something out of it and glued the rest together :)<BR/><BR/>loved it despite of that...I'm wondering if I have to even say that anymore...but I guess wanting to and having to is not the same thing...<BR/><BR/>enig!El enigmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04105047062252045849noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7738141.post-1139351561091274692006-02-07T22:32:00.000+00:002006-02-07T22:32:00.000+00:00Absolutely beautiful! You take my breath away, Ub...Absolutely beautiful! You take my breath away, Uber.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com